Ibis (the story i am writing)

[paint girl]

hi im making a story about ibis. ibis are Australian birds and everybody thinks they are pests, but i feel sorry for them so at school we had to write a story and i did it about ibis. now i wanna make it into a real book. i will post some of chapters here when i finish them but here are the caricatures:


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name: Patrick

personality: Very protective of his family

job: Farther

picture:




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name: Pearl

personality: Looks on the bright side to everything

job: Mother

picture:



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name: Pip

personality: Every time pip speaks, it has a W in it (like: Welp,Wello,Hwi,Wammy etc)

job: Baby chick

picture:



caricatures to be continued.......




PS im trying to make it a sad story

oh and one more:



name: Unknown but is known as the bully

personality: wants everything his way

job: killing everything he sees

picture: can't do but he looks like: He has mean eyes, Evil grin (when things go his way) and a huge scar along his right cheek.

CHAPTER 1




Once there was a family of ibis. A father ibis named Patrick who was very protective of his family, A mother ibis named Pearl who always looked on the bright side to everything and a little baby ibis named pip who everytime he spoke it had a 'W' in it. It was a big struggle to find food becuse everytime,every day,every hour, every minite greedy humans chased the poor birds and threw rocks at them,letting the family starve. BUT the meanest human of all was the Bully. The Bully was known to kill everthing he sees with this awful slingshot. He has mean eyes, Evil grin (when things go his way) and a huge scar along his right cheek. The ibis were terrified of him. One day the ibis were sitting in their small nest, counting their blessings. To their shock they saw a ugly face pearing into their nest it was the bully!. "I HATE IBIS!" he roared and grabbed pip."WELP! WELP!" pip honked as the bully dropped him in a garbage bag and road off on his bike. "MY BABY! MY DARLING LITTE BABY!" yelled Pearl and started swooping on the bully. "GO AWAY STUPID IBIS!" the bully said as he took out his big sling shot and amied to Pearls head. POW!!!! she dropped to the ground. "MY LOVE!!" honked patrick and flew over to her as she lay helplessly on the cement. "Are you aright?" he weeped in hope. "my.....litte......pip..." she wispered and her eyes flickerd shut. "NOOOOO!!!!!" Patrick weeped, "I will find Pip and bring him home" he promised "I will no let you down, Pearl" and thats when his mission began.

can sombody just read the stupid story and reply?!?

[platy2187]

It is pathetic!!!!!! LOL

[god]

It is pathetic!!!!!! LOL

Don't say that. The story seems interesting.

[platy2187]

I meant that it was sad to what happens to the baby bird!!!!!!! Not that the story is pathetic!!!!!! Sorry if you took it the other way round!!!!!

[paint girl]

I meant that it was sad to what happens to the baby bird!!!!!!! Not that the story is pathetic!!!!!! Sorry if you took it the other way round!!!!!

sighs lol i first thought the other way ROFL

[paint girl]

i got the idea of the bully cos there is this bully at my school that has He has mean eyes, Evil grin (when things go his way) and a huge scar along his right cheek. but i dont have a photo of him..... yet

[gryffindor65cp]

interesting .

[platy2187]

Hey continue the story!!!!!!

[paint girl]

okay im typing up more when i finish chapter 2 i will post it here

i also got the names from sponge bob like Patrick and pearl

[paint girl]

Chapter 2

As Patrick flew off he saw the every-day gardener pick up Pearl and buried her. "at lest sombody cares" sighs Patrick. After passing a few houses he saw a grubby crow digging in a rubbish bin. "Hey..um...exuse me..." asks Patrick "Do you know where the bully lives? you know the one who kills everthing he sees with this awful slingshot. He has mean eyes, Evil grin (when things go his way) and a huge scar along...". "You mean the guy who whent past with that big rubbish bag?" interrupted the crow. "Yes" says Patrick "he killed my wife and bird-napped my baby". "Do you really want to take the chance?" says the crow. "Yes" nods Patrick. "I have been bird-napped before by the bully." "I've seen it all" says the crow. "The bully lives wayyyyyyyyy up on the tip top of the mountain" he explains "his house is like a prison full of animal bones,heads on walls, and cloths made of animal skin!" "But thats not all!" "theres a lab where he experiments his potions" "Once they touch your skin it dissapears leaving a hole" "Thats how I lost my tail" the crow says. "Thanks for the info." says Patrick."
"Im Casper by the way" says Casper the crow. "Can I help you with your mission?" he asks. "Yes I do need a bit of help looking for Pip" agrees Parick.